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The Last Fight of Johnny Kilbane (#35)

When Should We Enter the Ring?

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Apr 14, 2026
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In June of 1923, Johnny Kilbane stepped back into the ring after nearly two and a half years away.

He was not just another contender. He was the champion. For eleven years (1912-1923), he held the World Featherweight title. No one in the division had ever held it longer, and no one since has repeated the feat. Kilbane was disciplined, elusive, and patient. He was known less for brute force and more for tactical control in managing a fight.

But that night in New York, he faced the Frenchman Eugène Criqui.

By the sixth round, it was over.

Criqui landed a right hook to the jaw that dropped Kilbane hard. The referee counted, and the title slipped away to a new victor. Kilbane’s history reign ended in a single exchange.

For many, Kilbane’s defeat is an appropriate salute to his career — like a warrior who proudly dies in battle. But for others, a question lingered around that fight. Not whether Kilbane was a great boxer. That was already settled. The question was quieter: Should Kilbane have taken the fight at all?

I’ve found myself mulling over this recently, because as it happens, Kilbane was my grandfather’s uncle.

Courtesy of the Cleveland State University Library Special Collection


The Review That Changed the Document

Recently, I wrote a dense, technical article for a client in ad tech. I wrote something I thought was effective and clear to the end user, so I submitted it for review expecting a quick win and publish.

Much to my surprise, the client responded with dozens of suggested edits. By the end, I was looking at an entirely different article. And I did not like it.

I genuinely believed that my initial version of the document was better. Its wording was clearer and its layout removed friction for the reader. The version the product manager recommended introduced a complex structure, with level 4 and 5 headers that risked burying information too deep in the page to ever be found.

But I hit publish anyway.

I decided not to enter the ring and fight.

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